Quality Blog Comment

We have the power to make people feel great with our positive comments, so we need to make sure we don’t upset the blogger with a negative comment. We used the programme Make Beliefs Comix to make a comic strip about a quality blog comment. It was fun but a little bit challenging to make the comic strip. Have a read of our comic strips. Do they make you feel proud?

real and fake

  We have been learning the difference between real and fake. We can use our 5 senses to know if something is real and I have added some images of real things on my first slide. Fake things can be in our imagination and are not real. I have added some fake images to my second slide. It is important to know the difference when I add things to my digital footprint.

Persuasive writing

kia ora,over the past few weeks in class we have been learning about persuasive writing. below is my persuasive writing I hope you enjoy reading it.

I am student at HPS and my name is John.

Did you know that art helps with the developing of the brain! This is why I think an art room  

here at Hps would be benefit the whole

school and by having an art room we would

be  able to do more art activities. Art is very healthy for us because it engage many area,s of our Brain and also have far-reaching effects on the learners mind.

And another reason is art promote social

skills that enhance the awareness and respect of others. And this has been shown

In study,s that have been done. And by having an art room would free up space in our class room/and we would be able to have more room and more storage to be  able to do  more art supplies, to be able to do more art activities which helps with our learning. And make more messy art which is fun. And it will cost lots of money so we could do fundraising and find a business to sponsor the art room and name it after that business.on closing/i think these reasons supporting my great idea of getting an art room built at Hps. please think about all the good benefits it would give so many students and teachers. thank you for listening.

By John