Persuasive writing

kia ora,over the past few weeks in class we have been learning about persuasive writing. below is my persuasive writing I hope you enjoy reading it.

I am student at HPS and my name is John.

Did you know that art helps with the developing of the brain! This is why I think an art room  

here at Hps would be benefit the whole

school and by having an art room we would

be  able to do more art activities. Art is very healthy for us because it engage many area,s of our Brain and also have far-reaching effects on the learners mind.

And another reason is art promote social

skills that enhance the awareness and respect of others. And this has been shown

In study,s that have been done. And by having an art room would free up space in our class room/and we would be able to have more room and more storage to be  able to do  more art supplies, to be able to do more art activities which helps with our learning. And make more messy art which is fun. And it will cost lots of money so we could do fundraising and find a business to sponsor the art room and name it after that business.on closing/i think these reasons supporting my great idea of getting an art room built at Hps. please think about all the good benefits it would give so many students and teachers. thank you for listening.

By John

I like school and I hate school

i like choice because we dot do work.i hate reading time because literary directions.😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😨😨😨😨.

Minecraft!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

in school we are working on are speeches my topic is Minecraft and it is boring😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱.and a lot of the time I get a lot of words wrong.😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😎😎😎😎😎😎.

Self Portrait

The best images to use on our posts are ones we have created ourselves or our own photos. We have been using Google Drawing to create our own and have learnt how to use new tools to make a self portrait.
We took a selfie and had to make sure we had our head and shoulders in the picture before we fitted it to the page.
Next we used the polyline tool to draw around our face because it is the only line tool that you can colour in.
This was tricky because I was tapping a lot
Next we had to match our skin colour and then we went into the custom tool so we could make our fill transparent.
We did this so we could see our eyes, mouth and nose.
We used the magnifying tool to make these a bit bigger.
I’m happy with the way my face looks on my self portrait because my eyes look great.
I will have to work on my using the polyline.
Thank you for reading my blog post. HAve you ever tried to draw your own self portrait? If not, I hope you will have a go and share your effort with me.

Daffodil Day

i went to shanty town!!!

My class Went to Shanty town and we'll go and be detectives
and he left fingerprints on the window so we used powder on the fingerprint and so we could see how and a rolling pin was evidence since you smack the bread and broke at me and then he still had half We went to the train station then we saw George Browns luggage when he went on the train he went out into the bush and he left trails for us to lead and see where he went and I saw some shoes in mud and a hat was hanging off a tree he was so tall he had to duck under doors and he was wearing size 1200 and he went to steal some more but when we saw foot Mark's everywhere and then he needed the train and he left a trail on the train tracks of muddy footprints so weird and unusual and found him but it was not him it was just a cardboard person so I left to lunch I looked around but I didn't see him I saw my friends again but they were at the first case .It was looking like him but he wasn't that giant with his trousers on . he was just a statue with a moustache and really scruffy hair,he worked at the gold mine .He went to the baker and stole some bread who saw him and then he ran away at 12 a.m. in the morning .





Amy mum took us and she dressed up in the olden day clothes which was so cool. I had my friends in the car we were all yelling so I laughed and told funny stories on the way back to the school .